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Improved Tenfold...

Very catchy and it's a great improvement on the original. I especially like how you changed the synth and added more reverb. Well Done.

Shiverwar responds:

Thanks, man! I don't even know how I added more reverb, hehe.

Lol!

I love the Arribas and the melody is pretty good too. Only problem is that the voice is very distorted. I still love it though, well done.

beanips13 responds:

im actually a guy and i was singing high so it does sound weird and destorted but im glad u liked my musical work in the backround

Lol...

Quite funny, I'd like to see this in an animation. Great Job! =]

Check out my latest song 'Boxed Space' and tell me what you think.

beanips13 responds:

cool song dude

Umm... Oh boy...

Well it was interesting but I didn't really like it very much, very few off-beat notes which made it sound far too uniform. It was okay but it just didn't hit me and make me go 'Wow!'. I would also suggest some automated effects or X/Y parameters of synths because I believe that would really improve your songs as well. Hope I helped and didn't sound too harsh.

Check out my latest song 'Rejected Ambience' and tell me what you think.

TMM43 responds:

no it wasn't harsh. Like I said. I don't like this song. haha. Thats why its on NG. LOL

Interesting...

It is very nice and well thought out and I'm sure it could be used in an animation or video scene, probably something sad like two people leaving each other forever. You captured a strong emotion in the song, well done.

Check out my latest song 'Rejected Ambience' and tell me what you think.

einbiegel responds:

thank you
i'll sure do!

Ha...

It's great, it sort of reminds me of a clown running in a circle. You could probably even develop this into a full song. Great loop.

Shiverwar responds:

Maybe. Thanks, man!

Umm...

The badly timed pattern changes really out me off the song, let alone the fact it was very plain and had very little depth or bass. I suggest getting a later version of FL Studio, even if it's only a demo, and then doing all your work in there being extra careful with the pattern changes. Good try and better luck next time.

Check out my latest song 'Rejected Ambience' and tell me what you think.

Shiverwar responds:

Well, thanks anyways. Check out my previous loop "Silly Times". Its short, but I think it's a good loop.

[EDIT]: Yeah, I admit this one sucked... not one of my best... but hey, you know, nobody is perfect, and that goes for me too :P

Nice!

I like this a lot, it just appeals to me and I love the echo-y reverb going on, it makes it sound even better. It's a shame about that hi-hat.

EpicM responds:

I fixed the hihat.. :) glad you like it :)

EpicM

Umm...

Needs to build up quicker in the intro and needs a lot more texture throughout. Maybe keep the drum beat or at least the bass drum in continuously and add in a bassline just to give it a bit of weight and depth. Check out my latest song Rejected Ambience, it has a nice heavy bass almost completely throughout although don't listen to the drum beat if you're looking more towards trance songs.

Good effort though! *gives hi-five*

bman3737 responds:

Thanks for the suggestions!

Bit Boring

The actual melody was good but apart from the sounds every so often and the change in pitch there wasn't much to listen to. If you do another song I recommend using more instruments with some varying melodies and maybe a drum beat to give it some solid structure.

Chernobog responds:

Yeah, I was doubting about that. I wanted people to hear the melody because I think it's one of the best I ever made, but there was a good chance I would screw up the song if adding too much sounds. I could let the beat sound a bit harder or just search another one.

Thx for your comment.

I hardly ever sumbit anything, partly due to real world responsibilities, partly due to lack of inspiration and partly because I'm just lazy. Sorry.

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