Umm...
The badly timed pattern changes really out me off the song, let alone the fact it was very plain and had very little depth or bass. I suggest getting a later version of FL Studio, even if it's only a demo, and then doing all your work in there being extra careful with the pattern changes. Good try and better luck next time.
Check out my latest song 'Rejected Ambience' and tell me what you think.
Well, thanks anyways. Check out my previous loop "Silly Times". Its short, but I think it's a good loop.
[EDIT]: Yeah, I admit this one sucked... not one of my best... but hey, you know, nobody is perfect, and that goes for me too :P
I can see the lonely person if I close my eyes.
It creates a strong emotion and would be best used in a video or animation where it can truly work it's magic. Very good.
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Bit short but good.
Would have liked to have seen what you did with it if it was longer but never mind. It is a very nice little song and just needs a bit more length instead of trying to cram all of the advancements of a full length 3 minute song into a third of the time.
Good job though!
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Oooh...Dramatic!
I can see this as either what was said just below, an epic battle, or a very dramatic cut scene. I liked the other one better but this is very very good too, you really are quite talented.
Relaxing...
It's so nice and calm, I can picture myself walking through a little village by a river on a sunny day with lots of happy people and playing children walking around. If only there were somewhere like that in real life nowadays. So peaceful... I love it!
Check out my latest song 'Rejected Ambience' and tell me what you think.
Nice!
I like this a lot, it just appeals to me and I love the echo-y reverb going on, it makes it sound even better. It's a shame about that hi-hat.
Umm...
Needs to build up quicker in the intro and needs a lot more texture throughout. Maybe keep the drum beat or at least the bass drum in continuously and add in a bassline just to give it a bit of weight and depth. Check out my latest song Rejected Ambience, it has a nice heavy bass almost completely throughout although don't listen to the drum beat if you're looking more towards trance songs.
Good effort though! *gives hi-five*
Thanks for the suggestions!
Bit Boring
The actual melody was good but apart from the sounds every so often and the change in pitch there wasn't much to listen to. If you do another song I recommend using more instruments with some varying melodies and maybe a drum beat to give it some solid structure.
Yeah, I was doubting about that. I wanted people to hear the melody because I think it's one of the best I ever made, but there was a good chance I would screw up the song if adding too much sounds. I could let the beat sound a bit harder or just search another one.
Thx for your comment.
I hardly ever sumbit anything, partly due to real world responsibilities, partly due to lack of inspiration and partly because I'm just lazy. Sorry.
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